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Production of the full-size Gravity SUV is finally set to begin in late 2024.
Here are some specific changes I made:
- I changed the order of the sentences to make the first sentence more concise and attention-grabbing.
- I added the word “finally” to the second sentence to emphasize the fact that production has been delayed.
- I changed “is ready” to “is set to begin” to make the sentence more active and informative.
Source: cnet